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Thoughts of Stomach Acid by ~sadira:iconsadira:



Come lay with me
Sit.
Have a beer
In the heat
And smile
At me

Please.

If I swallowed you whole
Would you mind?
Keep you in my stomach for safekeeping.

I need you inside of me
My soul, my mouth, my mind, my light…

And the thunder of your beauty is mine.

Come lay with me.
Sit.
Drink a beer with me.
And stay.

Why not stay forever?

Come here!
Let me have that hand of yours in mine

Let me take you in my arms and clasp the fear and throw it
Out
Crush it.

I’ll swallow that for you instead (Think it’ll come back up?) nausea
Make it disappear for you,
Dissolve inside
The acid
The rain…
If only to keep you happy
©2003-2009 ~sadira
:iconsadira:

Author's Comments

The full title is "Saturday Thoughts of Stomach Acid" Stomach acid is a freaky thing if you take the time to think about it.
I don't really know what this is. I like the idea, not the poem. Anyway, I'll fix it later.

Right now, I want a beer...

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:iconn0deal:
Now I want a beer. :D
:icontigertess:
Coolness! What a bizzare and yet very neat image that conjures. Bravo~

,'o-)

--
Tess ,'o-)

~LPSworkshop critic

Good Poets-
~fae, ~driftwood, *xpapertigersx
My clubs-
~livingpoetsociety

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June 28, 2003

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