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thanks to my villians by ~sadira:iconsadira:



Dearest sorrow, hate, and fear and a message to all that have harmed me:
I wanted to say
Thank you.

Thank you?

I appreciate your disgust in me

I have learned and cultivated

The maiming you’ve done has relieved me of the lies

Thanks for making me so much stronger
Without you, I would have learned nothing
And all your efforts to disclaim my valor have failed

Made me keener,
without death, how is one to truly know life?
Made me all the wiser,
And thinking and hopeful…

So thanks
©2003-2009 ~sadira
:iconsadira:

Author's Comments

This is a resubmission of a poem a few people gave me suggestions on. I wrote this thinking about the past. I have finally come to terms with what has happened to me, I think. This is how I feel the past, stupidity, and falsehood.

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Oh yes, I like, I like. Clap
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Interesting, and thoughtful. I like the bitter tone. It just manages to keep itself from becoming sarcastic: good balance. Keep it up! :) (Smile)

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May 4, 2003

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